Sunday, March 23, 2008

"'s all over now."

Never was a less true statement made. It is, however, the last line in the comic's rough draft, which turned out to be - craziness of all craziness - 138 pages: the exact amount I predicted before I started.

I must confess to a certain degree of smugness - I love the ending, it tightly wraps up all the loose ends I deem important, and is pretty funny. I had tried another ending out first - Carrie's (Justin's sister) diary entries explaining all the changes she'd seen in Justin (and a brief glance into what happened to her during the power out) but it over explained things, and was grossly sentimental for a story that included corpses, masturbation, and arson. I confess that I don't ever explain why the power out happened, how the power came back on, or how the family gets reunited. I consider these "plot holes" kinda irrelevant, as the story is about Justin's own journey of self-discovery.

Anyhow, I posted this one a little bigger so maybe you can read some of the dialogue.

Next step - tweaking the parts that need work, cutting out the excess and figuring out how this thing is going to look!

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