Thursday, October 30, 2008

Power Out Chapter 2

OK, sorry its been a while. Can't believe I used to update this thing every day! Maybe I ought to start that up again, it certainly keeps me productive during this nebulous thumbnailing stage.

I'm keeping the general plot outline for Power Out but am giving this second chapter a serious makeover. Out of every part of the book, I always found the part where Justin goes to town and interacts with its citizens genuinely lacking. But by incorporating my hometown's history, and some time-honored themes like running away and self-loathing, I can spice this part of the book up.

Judging from a lot of the feedback I've got from the first chapter, I need to make Justin more interesting. Now you're seeing a little more of his internal thought process, and how he reacts in tense situations.







Here's what I'm playing around with for the cover to the second chapter - any denizen of my hometown will recognize this thing for sure:

10 comments:

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Love the cover. It'll put our bumpkin town and its new-fangled electric clock invention back on the map!

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