Still have a lot of stuff I'd like to fix up, but this is coming together. Still need a cover, and I'd like to go back and hand letter everything but we'll see.
Odd question, but will everyone get the "drowning in your own thoughts" ending? The bubbles might be a bit big... or not... I'll toss the notion out there?
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Odd question, but will everyone get the "drowning in your own thoughts" ending? The bubbles might be a bit big... or not... I'll toss the notion out there?
Not sure if that gets across in the rough draft - all my future revisions will be geared towards making this clearer
spellings:
bureaucrat
shenanigan with ery I guess
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