Tuesday, January 15, 2008

First Draft Done

Still have a lot of stuff I'd like to fix up, but this is coming together. Still need a cover, and I'd like to go back and hand letter everything but we'll see.

Read the rough draft here

3 comments:

Anonymous said...

Odd question, but will everyone get the "drowning in your own thoughts" ending? The bubbles might be a bit big... or not... I'll toss the notion out there?

natsch said...

Not sure if that gets across in the rough draft - all my future revisions will be geared towards making this clearer

Anonymous said...

spellings:
bureaucrat
shenanigan with ery I guess