Tuesday, January 15, 2008

First Draft Done

Still have a lot of stuff I'd like to fix up, but this is coming together. Still need a cover, and I'd like to go back and hand letter everything but we'll see.

Read the rough draft here


Anonymous said...

Odd question, but will everyone get the "drowning in your own thoughts" ending? The bubbles might be a bit big... or not... I'll toss the notion out there?

natsch said...

Not sure if that gets across in the rough draft - all my future revisions will be geared towards making this clearer

Anonymous said...

shenanigan with ery I guess