Fourth page is done - not too satisfied with this one. There's some things I like, like the toothpick-inked second panel, but the whole fifth panel - the only thing I like is the composition. If I finish the 20 pages and the cover before the deadline for my grant application in late July, I may go back and fix this one. Until then tho, I'm just gonna focus on the next one.
BRONX IS BEAUTIFUL!
everyone craps on my neighborhood, but there are times it looks quite striking, in an urban-post-apocalyptic kind of way.
***UPDATE** I changed the last panel on page 4. Think this works a lot better.
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